Nice Try

I can hear that you like dubstep and tried to get some intelligent beats in it. Shame that the piano melody is awefull. You should have tried to get a better and more sounding melody in this. At 1,30 something the whole beat is blowed away by too much bass, this isn't really the meaning of dubstep. You can't hear any drums and hi-hats anymore. Your whole song gets vague, it's only a wall of sound. Better luck next time, try putting more time in it.