Very nice work bro!

I really like what you've thrown together here.
The melodies are very entrancing, and the break at 0:52 Is sounds pretty stellar!
I Really dig the subtle undertones, and general ambiance.
I Also really give you props on how well you've automated all of your fade-ins and outs/ other effects.

Couple things definately need some attention here though:

- The bass sample is way to "small" sounding up until the break at 2:35 (Try layering a few bass samples together, and blend them nicely for a nice full bass)
- The bass also seemed to linger in a few spots where it shouldn't have; the break at 1:24 could have been a lot more epic if the bass had followed the same dynamic movement of everything else.
- Mastering makes e-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g better with trance music; I definitely would like to hear a full mastered version of this...
- Watch your lows bro; eq some stuff out majorly, and make sure you're side-chaining everything you need to ;)
- things got kinda repetitive at the end. :p

Great work though dude! This is definitely coming along nicely. :D

~Dj Sonik

Balance!!!!

Hey I gotta say I was really impressed I liked it mostly towards the middle. Really cool feel to it! And good melody! One thing I would suggest concentrating on more though is instrument balance. Right from the beginning I could tell the bassdrum wasn't in balance with the rest of the song. Make sure one synth or instrument isn't overpowering anything else, gotta have that balance! But good job, keep it up. :)

Gonna give this
9/10
5/5
Cuz I just loves that melody stuffz in teh middle

a bit of input

i liked the progression and the fact that more than 3 chords were used. the piano at the end REALLY hurt my ears. too loud

Awesome track!

Great song! I'd love to hear the finished version of this. The beats are nice, and the melody is amazing, and is complimented nicely by well selected synths. Great job. You should PM me when you finish this track :) Keep up the great work!