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[SRG] Unfed (Feat. Josh Earl)

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Uploaded
Jul 31, 2011 | 1:52 AM EDT
File Info
Song
3.1 MB
2 min 42 sec
Score
4.14 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 4.14 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
355 Plays | 25 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

My first attempt at making a song with a friend, so check it out.

Lyrics:

"Unfed"

Verse

It happens everynight
He'll close his eyes
gets so mad that he looks outside
sees some guy
walk with his wife
goes and get the knife
and sneak along the side
Kill a young man
Young and deprived
Leave the girl
To sit and cry
Murder lines
the sky in red
The creaper in the night
goes unfed
That being said
He leaves again
More and more blood to shed

Chorus

Everynight he leaves his house
Looks for you
Like cat and mouse
Dont rest your head
Or go to bed
Or the creaper of the night
Wont go unfed

Verse 2 (Feat. Josh Earl)

Down in the dark
Lies a dead child
all his blood
Spread on the tile
Minutes ago
He was on his feet
But his thoughts
were obsolete
Stayed on the street
Plain in sight
Thats when he saw
The creaper of the night
Stared him down
in minutes time
The watching crows
sing their chime

Chorus

Verse 3

The basement's filled
With all of his kills
Their skins left chilled
Bodies lie still
People dissapear
Without a fight
You can just thank
the creaper of the night
Bodies stack high
No one can tell
Who created this hell
Now everyone's dead
The creaper of the night
Can finally go fed

Chorus/Outro

Reviews


g4ebguyGTg4ebguyGT

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well...

This song would be about 3x better if your vocals actually sounded serious. They are monotone no feeling at all. If you can fix that this would be a very good song. The chourus should not be changed sound wise. Leave it the same. Just learn to sing it different.


SaltyRiceGroup responds:

Basically I wanted it to be mono, because of the feeling of the song. Dark. You know? I dont know it's just the way I imagined it, thanks for the feedback anyways.