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how can i improve plz
I liked a majority of the song and the only thing I can pick out of it that I think could be looked at is the section starting at 0:11 to 0:40. I listened several times to this section but couldn't quite convince myself that the synchronization of the atmospherics and other materials in that section completely agreed with one another. Rest of the song was awesome though.
It's good stuff, just work on the mixing. I'd say a bit more attention to EQing and a touch of reverb would do this track wonders. It just seems like some of it gets jumbled together (it sounds better through headphones though). All in all a nice track, I like the fun, upbeat feel of it.
Too bad. You have direction, I can say that. Really, you just need to work on the technical side. Not mixed very well.
EQ? Faders? Reveb? Which?
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