Starts off with a marching towards war type thing once the percussion and strings come in, a theme I notice occurs a lot on this site. The low ends seem a bit too cluttered at times causing a bit of a mumbling through my headphones. I like once the drums pick up about two minutes into it, but I wish the main part would as well. About 3 minutes in it gave us that much needed change in pace from the main instrumentation. The drums start to rattle a bit in my headphones, but you recognized that the quality isn't the best so I won't go much into that.
I think at six minutes this song just drags on and you could easily condense it down two or three minutes and still get your point across while keeping the listener more engaged. It certainly wasn't bad though. You definitely kept the theme going throughout the whole six minutes and that is a good feat, and it flowed pretty well which is something I notice a lot of people struggle with.

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