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Make a Wish (MYD_Boi) [WIP]

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Uploaded
Jul 23, 2011 | 6:55 PM EDT
File Info
Song
2.3 MB
2 min 33 sec
Score
2.94 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 2.94 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
452 Plays | 20 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

MYD_Boi (OxyJin) made the beat, Chorus and a chunk of the lyrics after the second chorus block
HasanAbulFez spit the rap
Dr.T of DirtyMouth Productions produced the track.

Preproduction WIP

Enjoy or don't.

Close your eyes and make a wish
Tell me what you want, tell me what it is
I want more time, to do what I never did
To tell all the people I love, the words I never said
Close your eyes and make a wish
Tell me what you want, tell me what it is
I want more time, to do what I never did
To tell all the people I love, the words I never said

Sit back and relax, so much stress in my head
Contemplate the end sometimes wishin' I were dead
But instead, I just gotta hold my head up high
Don't ask why just thank Allah that I'm alive
And that I have a chance to live another day
And that I have a chance to simply try and pay
The world back for all the evil that I've done
If I erase my sin then best believe I've won

Dedicated to OxyJin - Mewsik you can breathe to
So whith that said I just gotta spit it to you

How many mistakes have we made in the past
How many people have we wronged when we've lashed
Out so ungreatful with the life Allah has given
And what things would we do if more time was given
To right the wrongs, of our past ways,
but time is running short and we're in our last days.

Close your eyes and make a wish
Tell me what you want, tell me what it is
I want more time, to do what I never did
To tell all the people I love, the words I never said
Close your eyes and make a wish
Tell me what you want, tell me what it is
I want more time, to do what I never did
To tell all the people I love, the words I never said

I watch as time quickly passes me by
My family cries
good bye to my friends
My lifes come to an end
The days come when I leave this place
But the day that I leave
I want a smile on my face
as I'm resting in peace
Knowin' I done the least
Amount of sin in this life
Hopein'for a feast
In Junnah man, 'cause my demons i've faced them
And my sins, well, let's hope I've erased.

Reviews


auroalee1auroalee1

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

3/5

It's a good idea. You rap pretty well, but some of your lines seem rushed and unbalanced.
I liked how you layered the voices, and the beat is pretty catchy. Just work on your lyrics. :)


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HasanAbulFez responds:

Yeah I completely agree with the rushed part. I banged this out in about 30 minutes (the raping on the track) because I rarely have a chance to use a quality microphone and I was in the office so I can't keep the doors closed. I plan on re doing it. Add to the fact that half of the second part wasn't written by me, I was just being loyal to the person who mane the beat, the hook and some of the lyrics so it was hard to make everything perfect in that amount of time. INshaa Allah though I'm getting my own equipment next month so I can spend the hours needed on the track. Thanks for the fair and unbiased review it is much appreciated. Keep peeled for when I re-do it inshaa Allah.