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Jul 23, 2011 | 3:39 PM EDT
File Info
1.8 MB
1 min 58 sec
3.08 / 5.00

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Rated 3.08 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
415 Plays | 24 Downloads
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Electronic - Dubstep

Author Comments

My try at song making, it's still kind of a demo. Any criticism would really help :)



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It almost puts you in a trance the way it buildsup

I ran out of space up there ^^^
I like the first 50 seconds the best! I like how all of the instrument voices sound, my only criticism of the first 50 seconds is that some of notes might not sound exactly right. At 0:54 I'm not sure what happens! It sounds really cool, but then it ends. I think you should expand upon that and add a beat behind it and keep looping it and lead into something new. At 1:10 it sounds kind of like James Bond - not really my favorite part. It just doesn't sound very good in my opinion. It has a lot of layers that don't mesh well overlapping each other. 1:51 sounds good, but again it just sounds cool then ends. All in all, there is some good material here. I would definitely expand upon 0:54 and 1:51, and potentially either get rid of or completely rearrange 1:10 to 1:51 so it doesn't sound so chaotic (in a bad way)... For a first try (I assume) at making music, this has a lot of potential. I like your style! Keep practicing and getting better!

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megamagition responds:

Thanks for the review!

The 0:54 part was supposed to be sort of a transition between the two parts, I'll definitely try on expanding that. I agree that the second part is a bit of a mess.

Thanks again.