Grabbed me from the start
This one gripped me instantly. The intro sounds very well suited to a game I used to love called Seiklus. Also the dubsteppy transition - I didn't see that coming at all, and it worked so well. I think what would help most here is a little soundstaging, sidechanneling, equalizing, and so forth. It could really help bring all the sounds apart and bring the piece to life. 8/4