Version 2 comes in with many changes to the original. First of all, I've extended the verses and tweaked the drums. Next, I added a new underlying tone to the song, giving it a real electronic-pop feel (especially when it boosts in the chorus). I think this might be one of my best revisions to any of my songs simply because it flows and, at least to me, sounds smooth.

So, if you're listening to this, even if you're just raiding the newest submissions list, please do me a favor and comment. I don't care about your vote as much as I do receiving feedback! What do you like? What don't you like? What would you change? What emotion does this song bring to bear (if it moves you at all?)