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I'm not sure whether to keep this song like this or transmit it to my band.
Nice slow rock
Good work on this one, the guitar samples sound just right. It's the sort of slow rock you might hear for some sort of 'city streets at night' scene. Live performance is always a great deal harder to get to sound right after you've composed it digitally... it'll never sound quite the same.
Your guitar sounds like it's getting clipped, you can tell by that static sound when the sample gets louder. I think you're composing your pieces too loud. Also, this may just be me, but I'm having a hard time understanding the lyrics. Maybe write them out like you normally do?
Good job, keep it up!
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Thanks a whole lot man.
Also, I'm really glad you got that vibe listening to this. It means I'm doing my job!
Somewhat reminds me of some of the older rock tracks, or simply some new-wave dreamy rock tracks.
I really like the track. the vocals are very good, though slightly off-pitch at certain places, in particular when you push it higher. The drums are fine, but not the most original, and they seem to cut off a bit early, sounding unnatural.
The backing guitar that plays in the back has a simple melody, it's a bit too low, IMO, maybe make it a bit louder. There seems to be some sort of interference on the lead guitar, on the accords that are played. Not sure if that was intentional, but it doesn't sound too good.
Really like the echo effect you put into the vocals, in particular. Brings out the dreamy feeling.
Ending drags on a tad, could've cut it off a bit earlier, not too interesting listening to the hi-hat go on for a while and then the bass playing a couple somewhat random notes.
I'd love to hear this made with a proper band and proper recording (:
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Thanks a lot bro.
Wow are the vocals very heavy and why the echo effect? It still sounds great though and I do like this song for the most part too.
The guitar sounds pretty great and has a crazy flanger to echo after effect I think. The bass is quite heavy and wet yet also enjoyable as well so this does quite well as a good song too. The drums are basic yet sound very good as well so I like that too.
Overall, awesome song, lots of echo effects heard.
thanks a lot broski
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