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Malfunction (Mr Jay)

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Uploaded
Jul 6, 2011 | 3:44 PM EDT
File Info
Song
5.8 MB
2 min 33 sec
Score
4.03 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.03 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
644 Plays | 86 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Dance
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Author Comments

I decided to test out the Blutonium Boy samples with this song. It really didn't take much effort to create this song, but I love the kicks.

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Rate it, review it, let me know why it's such a bad song if you don't like it.

Reviews


lantarenlantaren

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

cool

kinda.... hardstylish. Some of the main melody sounds a little too... detuned? it sounds like a more upbeat-type song, but then it kinda changes from a major scale to a minor scale... I guess? I might no even know what I'm talking about, but maybe you can understand :D

anyway good job.


MisterJayElectro responds:

I know what you mean, that saw at the beginning was a little off. This was a cheap song made on a cheap computer, and I had a lot of fun making it, but I know what you mean about the errors. Maybe someday I'll fix it. But probably not. Thanks for the review!!! And the advice, I always love advice :D


Sharkpep1Sharkpep1

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Guess Who

I like it. It reminds me of off beat industry. Anywho, I though overall the song was very good. I can only imagine the cover art for this one...


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MisterJayElectro responds:

Hah, I don't know what the cover art will look like, but I'm sure you'll cook something good up! Honestly, this song was just to mess with the Blutonium pack, so I'm surprised it turned out to be worth a 7/10 average. And yeah, a little Offbeat Industry influence here :P Only a touch though. Thanks for the feedback!! Always love it!


TheDDJTheDDJ

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Hello again :D

Very nice layers, but it feels sudden off the start. Try introducing it slowly, with some delay and reverb. Also, the high end of your Parametric spectrum is a touch overtuned at 0:38. I listened to this on my lappy's speakers and still caught the buzz.

Very interesting sound, and I'm very intrigued. When you're ready, try editing out your own kicks. Its challenging, but the control you earn is worth it. From here, you can start making undermelodies with your bass.

Food for thought, bro <3


MisterJayElectro responds:

Thanks man! I gotta check out some editing; I'm still a little afraid to mess with the instruments. I gotta toughen up and do it though, I suppose, if I really want to sound as good as you.

I've slowly been working on my own kicks, but I continue to get the same sound. But I will NOT give up. I really wanna start making some good reverse bass sounds, too.

Thanks for the help, always very appreciated!!