Hmm
I like it. It's good as an 8-bit type song. But you've got a point, it's a bit repetitive, and you've got too many competing melodies in my opinion. Maybe up the volume of one, lower the volume of another?
This is good. You could improve on it, but it's great for a new artist. I was once in your place, and honestly I think this is better than my old stuff. 4/5, 7/10.
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