Score: 8
"Made me grin like a madman"
date: April 14, 2006
I love the way the same melody transforms when the choir-type sounds are taken away and the instruments changed.
I think the ending stage is sound enough that that could be lengthened with a few slight variations and it'd be something enjoyable...
But as you suggest, maybe it'd be wrong to make it more than what it is... and the beginning would surely get annoying if you just wanted to listen to the dance part.
But I would like to see the melody explored a bit more. If you could take it through even more styles... that'd be an interesting challenge, maybe?
Also, the part at the end would make a quality loop for some sort of light-hearted puzzle game I think.