Having heard a latter version first...

I actually like this one a bit better. The one I heard was done in such a way that some of these tones were buried... Although, mastering does need done. :)

Nuke teh 0 bombers. >.<

~Sir_Furious

Cheesy, but good!

Great sound, accept for the distortion in the end, some compression or a limiter would do good. However, I don't have the feeling that you care about this song anymore :P
Anyway, the chords are cheesy, but Idk about that anymore, because I think it's about how you use them. And you used them pretty well :D
I like your use of filters, keep it up man :D
But please make full songs :D

IKR

bloody hate 0 bombers, look at my songs for prime examples, anyway, great job, mastering isnt that good i have to admit when the bass turns up at about 30 seconds it becomes all fuzzy, anyway great job, love your work, keep it up :D
9/10
5/5