Nice simple melodies
I have to disagree with the person below, all the melodies are fine, just the sounds seem awkward.
nbv
Nice simple melodies
I have to disagree with the person below, all the melodies are fine, just the sounds seem awkward.
thats chiptune for u :_)
Sweet Melody
At first, I thought this was going to be some kind of dubstep song with the bass there. I was mistaken.
Really nice melody you have going there, sweet and simple, the bass needs to be toned down a biiit there however. I don't like the change of melody at 0:26 however, seems awkward.
The second part of the melody from 0:52 sounds great, but some keys seem off, its hard to tell which ones exactly, just try listening to it by ear.
Alright, good song though, it just needs to be a slight bit less repetitive, I mean, I don't mind repetitive songs in Video Games though. That robotic lead at 0:26, I don't like that. And the bass needs to be toned down a bit.
Still, it's your song, nice job.
-Mr.MeD
0:26 is actually my favourite part, they're arpeggios which are pretty much a chord in chip music. the melody @ 0:52 is the part that sounds awkward (to me at least) - specifically the note at the 7th bar (1:14) near the end of the melody,,, seems a bit off, so i can see what you mean (unless you're referring to the use of the sliding pitch seeming off)
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