Its great
Gonna be honest it sounds like a cross between trance and something else... like dub-step or techno or something - can't quite put my finger on it. As I listen to this I get a sense I might here it in a flash portal in the future.
I like it though - it gives a sense of twilight but sustains an epic and gradually growing tension. still... I feel like something's missing...
PS: I hate it when recordings disagree with you too... I sometimes suffer similar problems.