This track so so much potential!

It i really nice, i mean it many not be the best in production and mastering, but boy does it creat a mood, does it create an atosphere. I think that is what makes this track so good, also what many tracks now are missing!
Dude, the pads are so deep and mystifying. I would say one fix is in need, it's the kick!
I know you said your impatient, but thats no excuse. You must show that you do care =[ Or else nobody will want to "help you out" if you don't want to help yourself out.
I think you could replace the drums with a bit less bassier kicks, It would not make it so loud at the parts when they are playing.

I would love to do a remix of this track, could I?