Ooh, I got so excited when I found out that I could submit sound files to NG, haha...
So this is probably the best piece I've ever done so far (LOL I KNOW) but considering the fact that I've only used my music program for around 5 hours, I guess it could have been worse...
In fact... I actually feel kinda proud that I managed to make this one work, it was pretty troublesome...
But there it is, so I hope you like it!
Mhmm...That's I about it for my first submission on here then. But don't worry, I promise I'll spam more crap on you in the future! :D
Oh and, constructive critique would be nice!! (I'm still a total newb at this lolol)
Quite good.
Quite good for a new music producer. Actually, it's hard to believe you've only worked with whatever program you're using for 5 hours.
This may not have much coherence, but it is well made and well mixed all around. Very dramatic. Please keep it up!
Problems I noticed:
-The bass from 0:16 to 0:22 seems off. Slightly out of place.
-The bits are a bit too short, I'd extend each "section" a bit longer, put some more variation in.
Otherwise, awesome!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
NGAraMax 
ZenreeioGrounds 
G2961 
Coomic 
burningmagma 
