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MrSaint - Flying by (WIP)

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Uploaded
May 11, 2011 | 5:02 PM EDT
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Loop
1.2 MB
1 min 4 sec
Score
3.24 / 5.00

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Rated 3.24 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Composed in Fruity Loops 9. Couldn't finish it now, probably will come back to it later.

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BuoyBuoy

Rated 3 / 5 stars

err

did you have some direction or theme in mind when you made the melody? There's hints of a "call and response" type theme (i.e the high notes 'respond' to the low note) in the latter half but other than that there's no apparent direction. So as a result it sounds quite random and well, not very thought through. Some things I would recommend you to try out if you're going to make melody-centric songs is: figure out a simple catchy "main" phrase, focus on that phrase with repetition and have other instruments/embellishment notes serve to bring out that main phrase rather than take attention away from it. You do have a repeating main phrase here but the bass, drums and higher piano notes are all over the place.

Sorry if this review is just an onslaught of criticism, it's just a wip so don't worry about it :D haha


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MrSaint responds:

Thank you very much for the criticism, mate! It helps me to find the source of the problem.

Didn't really have a direction, just random stuff in A minor scale, but I'll continue working on this piece, putting more thought into it