Regardless...

I think it still sounds cool as hell even if it's a preset. Kudos once again man, don't fail to impress.

Just Presets, really.

The main melody line you have going, is the common "8-bar" preset from z3ta, I believe. You've used it okay, but thats not the point, it's a preset, and therefore derives your song of originality, it's a very commonly used preset, heck, I see it everywhere.
The melody line at 00:55 is just random, comes from nowhere and is very cluttered from all the noises in the background, maybe a more clearer saw/lead for it would suffice.
Really, the rest of the song is just the same "8-bar" preset and a hash of the melody you used earlier, this song isn't much, sorry to say.

A few things you should think about doing, one, is making your own melodies. I mean, if you're going to run a melody for the bulk of the song, make it your own, everyone knows about 8-bar by now. Two, is transitions, make them more expected, they seemed random and out of place. Make it slide from segment to segment.

Still, work on this piece, take out 8-bar and make something original, you've got a good backing set, you just need an original melody.

-Mr.MeD