Boring

Repetitive, boring, and not even catchy. If you're going to make repetitive music then at least make it somewhat catchy. This blows.

Needs fixing.

Oh wow, the intro starts of great, awesome bass you have going there.
The clap that starts at 00:03 is a bit too loud in comparison, I think it needs to be turned down a bit.
Not a fan of the sound at 00:13, it's nice, but sounds like it's clipping, and the notes seem off too. I think it needs to be fixed a bit.
Alright, after awhile the other sounds come in, it's nice, gives a bit of variation to the song, but it gets a bit repetitive and monotonous nevertheless.

I think the main problem with this song is the fact that it's a bit cluttered, theres a lot of sound going on and a lot of it is low, bassy tones. You need to EQ this and bring up the other end of the spectrum, make it clearer.
I think also, the intro bit should be extended, made longer, as it's a good beat to begin with.
Still, nice piece, but needs fixing.

-Mr.MeD