So i spent some more time on this and fixed alot of things i did'ent like. Construtive critisim is always welcome so get posting those reviews.
Vocals by east coast clubbers
LYRICS
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Verse 1
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Looking for silence, forever the same,
Go to my house, looks like open this day.
Maybe i want to hear when he's calling my name.
Maybe i want to listen to the sounds of the rain.
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Verse 2
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I try to wakeup again, day and night.
I want to run some, we're out of the sky.
Maybe time can forgive us, some things from the past.
Maybe i want my dreams, forever to last.
hmmm
More than 7 mins and it souds like a rip since the vocals and the bass already start at the beginning. nice kick and clap though.
the rest needsa bit more work on the voume levels + sound quality.
the transitions could have been better as well. the melody makes it sound like a dance track and the bass is too deep it disturbs the other sounds.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
gavkay21 
