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oh hey i was wondering if i could make this song a little more cooler? only if you want :)

Whatever the previous guys said... N more

The xylophone (or whatever you call it) alone is not enough. Add some more waterflow ambience for the background.

Sorry.

No. :| Just, no. The intro is ok, but at about 12 seconds, it just collapses and fails. Only one instrument, no tune that works. What this sounds like is that you just took a piano roll and clicked on keys with your mouse, recording the sound from that.

Try layering it, and having a little bit more variety in the instruments/tune. Make sure the tune is in one key or in keys that go together. From 0:12 onward, it's just monotonous, going up, down, up, down, up, down without any real coherence. It doesn't fit with the beginning either.

That's my two cents. Hope that it can be improved, because with the introducing tune, this could be interesting.

Lol

Made me laugh at a certain point and its ok i like the start of the song mostly POO WAP WAP TOH TOH TOH WATTA DOH DOH

Expected more

Considering this was under the heading "best tracks ever" I was expecting much more. This was short and basic, and I'm sorry to sat this just doesn't deserve the apparent high ratings it has received. Don't get the wrong idea, this isn't bad, it's just nothing particularly good either, hence my average rating.