Erm...

I purely hate this kind of instruments (all of them) and drums.
And I hate as well those clubbing "melodies", cause finally it's not even melodies, just some beat made with a melodic instrument.

Anyway i, must confess it's rather effective. It's well done, even if i absolutely don't like it. It sounds like professional work. I can easily understand you spent much time on it, cause the result is here. The effects are really worked on, and are perfectly inserted in the general song. They are not over-used in such a style, which is a good point. It stays quite sober in my opinion. And another good point is that you succeeded in the different breaks you made. Many varied transitions (with variation of tempo, mounting notes, use of the cut-off, etc.) leading to a completely different "melody" and beat. And overall, we can't deny that everything is totally part of a very coherent ensemble.

The problem is that these kind of main theme where you just repeat the same note again and again, is just unstandable for me. And quite objectively, i could say that it's not really an original song. That's the other side of sobrierty ;)

Very good job, even if I don't like it.