Score: 9
"Neat"
date: January 24, 2006
the violin instrument you used at the beginning serves to set up a tense environment rather effectively, however I would consider note placement, they seem a bit off and random.
I would not use the brass you did, it just doesn't seem to fit in too well.
Have you considered a delay effect on this piece, it would give it a pretty neat effect.
It was quite enjoyable.
4/5 from me, keep them coming ^^.