Score: 6
"Good joke, but offensive."
date: May 10, 2008
It's a good joke. It's offensive to women (who I respect), but it is pretty amusing. I would've given you a higher rating if you didn't waste so much time by getting to the punch line. Also, you could've had a better delivery and put a bit of life into your voice.
And to those who gave this a bad score: it is a joke, not a (subliminal) message. I like women, but I didn't vote too low because of that. Hell, I cast that aside and voted for what really mattered: the material. It is entertainment, people! Sheesh. -_-
But yeah, it could've been better and you should've had 1-2 extra jokes. Cut out the dialouge, have a better delivery, and you will get a better score. Plain an' simple, aye?
3/5
6/10
May 24, 2008
Author's Response:
Bah, if i didn't point out the sheer hilarity of the fact the joke is being spoken to myself then people would be whining about how i didn't have anyone else to tell the joke, but at leas you defended me on the fact everyone's saying i'm a sexist, i've always respected my girlfriends and loved them dearly.
^truth was here^