Goodgoodgood :D

It was cool, really raw sound, I like that :D
As said below, the kick could use some work. If you want to search for a good way to EQ and compress a kick, I recommend watching a tutorial on youtube.
I learned eq'ing etc. by watching trancecrafters tutorial. It's actually for trance, but the concept about EQ and compression is the same, could be useful :D
The vocals were really cool, I liked them a lot.
I wasn't sure about it, and I thought that hardstyle was always written in fast 3/4 or 4/4 triplets, but that's not always that way, so I like how it differs from the usual :D
5/5 for you, sir. Good job, keep it up!

Good, but here's some pointers.

I liked the melody and bass a lot. I think the kicks at the beginning need to be remastered, and the kicks throughout the song need to be louder (I could barely hear them). Anyway, you have a great base for an awesome song! Keep it up!

im not a big fan of hardstyle...

but this is pretty cool! i might suggest that the kick in the beginning be mastered better. other then that, nice! :)

5|5 9|10 {5.00 / 5.00 (unchanged)} nice work!

DJ~CLYME

Heavy

5 from me.
Keep It Hard