nice rmx
crap, everyone else said the good stuff, but i still want to say that this is awsome
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EDIT#1: changed the intro, just stuck to the chords instead, sounds pretty good i might say, but you be the judge :)
The song has a kinda slow start but give it a chance :)
I was looking around youtube and stumbled apon a fl studio tutorial on uplifting trance by AgniveshBaghel (great tutorial btw), started playing around with his tips, and then after a while i decided to try and make a remix of Mario Lopez - Angel Eyes; this is the result ^^.
the song is a bit long but please listen to all of it, would truly appreciate it :)
enjoy ^^
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W00t - 2011-05-11 - all time best scoring in audio portal #27 :D
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-shoephly
Shoephly responds:
thanks man, really appreciate your feedback! :D
Great remix
Yeah remeber the classic from ages ago and nice is a good remix. Did you use a midi for the melody or did you write it?
Shoephly responds:
i did use a midi for the baseline progression and i took the melody in it and used parts of it in the 2:08+ part, but the rest was done by myself.
thanks for the review :)
-shoephly
Pretty good :)
Great work very well made.
Only thing I would have done differently is at 2:08 after the vocal finishes and the drop comes in I would have put in a stronger lead melo in it, thats just my style though :s
Keep it up m8 ;)
Shoephly responds:
first of all thanks for the feedback! :)
The thing with the synth was that i couldnt find/make a strong synth i really liked at that part so I decided to use that softer synth because of it's smooth blending feeling, personally i like it like this - but your opinion has been noted :D
thanks yet again. :)
-shoephly
Overall good
First off, I am by no means a trance specialist, so please forgive me if I say stupid stuff because of that xD
The intro felt kind of unnecessary to me. It didn't really fit in with the rest of the song. You should use your intros to create a general mood for the rest of your piece. I was expecting something way different because of that intro.
The transition at around 1:15 sounds a bit weird, but that's because of the sudden change of mood (sad -> cheerful). I think it would've been better if you started the song at around 1:20 instead. That would also 'fix' the length of the song.
You used a couple of wrong notes in the last part (4:30 and onwards), which is a shame. They sound bad in my ears. Don't forget that music theory, even with electronic genres like trance.
Overall, it's a typical trance song, but it works well. Wasn't the original by Mario Lopez by the way and not Marco Lopez?
Anyway, it's catchy, it's cheerfull. All in all 8/10 and 4/5.
Shoephly responds:
First of all thanks a tonne for taking the time to write a review.
about the intro, when i started making it I wasn't really sure where i was going with it, and evidently it's noticeable. The transition is something that i dissliked from the begining, but for the sake of making the song i "let it be for now"(which i'll fix real soon), and about the ending, the bum notes couldve been because i rushed it, and now that i've relistened to it, i totally agree.
And yesss... the vocals are from mario lopez xD, dunno why i wrote marco
Yet again thanks so much for your review, much appreciated! :)
sweet
oh man this is such an awesome song
Shoephly responds:
thanks alot for the feedback, truely appreciated :)
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