Score: 7
"Hello"
date: January 12, 2006
Hey CexPanda! My name is Dj_Seri and im and old dance freak of the portal. I havent submitted in a while, but it doesnt stop me reviewing others.
Now, this had alot going for itself but theres a few things you have to make sure you fix. Your bass is original but it doest fit, cause of the slide it makes it sound off key to the rest of the song; maybe if you made a bassline(change the key of the bass) Another thing would be to take off all the echo/delay you have put(or thats on the premade plugins) Because its crumples up the song and makes static!!
This song is well organized and very well put together. I love the little chimes/bells, they add such awesome atmosphere! And the kick sounds pretty crisp on my headphones :P The only missing would be the changing bassline and it would be a great song! Keep at it its only going uphill from here.
Sincerely
Nicolas
Author's Response:
thansks for the review
i made a couple changes.. but not sure how i should go bout reposting it haha.. oh well