I heard a song like this.

On my old Gameboy SP, haha and the game was pretty bland, but i loved the music, not bad, a little boring. the drums sound like a twig hitting a door or something... wayyyy more drums....

hmmm

a little to repetitive. in my opinion the percussion needs to be stronger, not louder, just, different kick sample would be good. a better bassLine would be a good change. i don't know really what to say...what i mean is, this is good as it is, but there just seems to be some missing element to this song and I'm getting really annoyed that i cant figure out what it is. lol. i do think that this would make a great DnB or BreakCore song.

5|5 8|10 ok!

DJ~CLYME

A bit repetitive, but technically sound.

This one's a keeper, Shawn. Good blend of sounds, interesting percussion choice, flows nicely. It's just a little on the repetitive side. A second percussion pattern for the "break" (where it moves from the material that was exclusive to the original to the material from the Black Mages version) would break the monotony there a ton, or even just another loop on top of the current one.

Either way, good work, Shawn. :D

~Joshy676

P.S.: Been busy, but I thought you might want a review. :)