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Credits & Info

Uploaded
Jan 5, 2006 | 12:36 AM EST
File Info
Song
3.2 MB
3 min 28 sec
Score
2.00 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 2.00 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
468 Plays | 204 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

My home boy Croation made the beat, n im not gonna explain what this is about just listen.

Reviews


DavidOrrDavidOrr

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not bad

This is definately one of your better works. I think the chorus part with the longer strings would have a better impact if you had a different chord progression in there. Also I think a break with just a drum beat and some sort of bass synth solo would be good.

Also, lay off the swears a bit- a few are alright I guess, but the whole part towards the end when you are talking about your fans and every other word is cussing- it just sounds obnoxious. If you ever make it big it would sound a little better, but it just sounds like you are trying to look cool right now.

Also, when you say Mother Fucker one time you sound like you are constipated (you're yelling or somthing).

" I'm never going to fucking stop"

...fucking? why? Use swears to accent a point, dont just throw it in there.

Don't get me wrong, I was pretty impressed with your rapping style and the lyrics are pretty solid too. Do somthing that makes you stand out and you may get noticed.


ThePedicidleGhost responds:

U no what man? Your right. Im gonna work on the cussin and makin myself stand out. Seriously. Thanks for the advice n the review. I appreciate it man.


nomorenognomorenog

Rated 5 / 5 stars

WOW

I really like this,man,that beat's HOT. I wonder why the score's so low. ima' go checkout your songs on D-Music.

Thanks for your vote, KylerHe! You voted 5 for What People Want, raising its score from 1.40 to 2.00.


ThePedicidleGhost responds:

Thanks man.


FanauticFanautic

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Lovin this...

This track is straight fire... Thanks for all the reviews man! Were homies now. Keep it up...
~FanautiC~


ThePedicidleGhost responds:

No Problem n Hell yea lol. Thanks man. All I gotta say is keep doin what u do man.