great song, sudden appearances

I personally did like this song. ill say i rlly lyk how u wrapped the song up, tht this wuz mor of an upbeat dubstep i dont hear much, and just the flow. now my problem is tht there were too many sudden appearances in loops. itz the original loop u keep in the whole song which u shooold do alter it or not, but there's points where u add this or these loops, let it go and a different one let it go again and so on until around 3 min or somethin lyk tht. also, mayb the beginning cooldve been lyk a small vol. to hugher but thtz just my opinion, i aint markin a point for that reason. but either then tht i gotta say pretty good song, try workin' on it lyk less random effects and it'll hav great potential :)