Pretty Good
Overall not a bad song, a few suggestions, i would make the vocals a little louder....no offense but it sound like you sang it a head of time on a bad recorder and added music and drums later..........I would just build up the vocals
hi, this is darko. drummer/singer/lyricist of the band Skattar. me and my friends made this band a few years ago. this is one of our earlier songs that we have redone. were hoping to upgrade our recording equipment sometime soon. but we make do with what we have. if you like us check us out on youtube eswell for more songs. i uploaded this one onto new grounds because its the most catchy, id be really proud if you used it in a video or in anything really. if you have read this then thank you for taking the time.
the lyrics are below
have you ever known we were wrong
we feigned and lied that we were strong
and i will be forever lost
in the little games you played
but now it seems ive broken free
take one look back and finally see
you dont care im gone
i knew it along
i cannot hide
everytime i tried
we slowly died
i wont this time (as a build up to the chorus)
what id give to fight
fight for one more night
just to spend with you
just to make it right
held on to the past
couldnt let it go
but now its time
its now i know
Yeah
i know
trieed fixxxing you for so long
but was there ever something wrong
and all of there hurtful stares
were only in ur head
so high you stop and look around
how long untill you reach the ground
and all those things that you will see
but no u wont see me
no u wont see me
i cannot hide
everytime you lied
i slowly died
but not this time
not this time
what id give to fight
fight for one more night
just to spend with you
just to make it right
held on to the past
couldnt let it go
but now its time
its now i know
I HAVE TO GO!
go so far away
from this place of lies
haunting every night
i just have to fight
try and reach the light
and before i fall
i will leave itt all
Pretty Good
Overall not a bad song, a few suggestions, i would make the vocals a little louder....no offense but it sound like you sang it a head of time on a bad recorder and added music and drums later..........I would just build up the vocals
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.