alright
okay. There is a lot going on here, so i'm just going to dive right in. Lets start with the beat. Wow thats hectic! It's neat because it gives the song that fast, hard pace like a drum and bass song. However, it starts to feel stagnate after a few times. I would have liked to see the same instruments, but with more variation via new patterns. You did a good job of putting new sounds in there (like 0:47), but even those are the same ratatatatat pattern that the main beat is already capitalizing on. You've got a good base going on with the beat and with more layers and patterns it could really take off.
The main melody is good, I'm not sure if I would have picked the same sound, but whatever floats your boat. I do like the long flowing pad sound that plays in there. It give a great contrast to the jumpiness of the beat. Again ,like the beat, a few more touches and additions to the melody could really bring it to the next level.
I like what you've got going on. It could use some work but it's really shows potential. I'm going to look through some more of your stuff.
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