Hope you can look past the roughness and listen to the creativeness.
dude, you are awesome
great singing and guitar, maybe towards the end, take into a pause and switch to an electric and kick some ass!! overall its great and i would really like some tabs. only problem is the crap equipment but i really like it!
Cheers!
~Poseideon
yea.. i do need better stuff but im happy with my music.. i dont plan on being famous i just like writing.
LYRICS.......
"Little boy. Don't you go inside that room. Don't open up that door. Your mother is sleeping.(x2)
Why'd you let her go and die! Why'd you let her go and die
Your mother is sleeping, someone try and wake her! (x3)
Little boy. Don't you go inside that room, Don't you look into that face that is sleeping.
Mother! Why don't you wake up from your sleep. Step away from pills and pain, I know your not sleeping!
Why'd you let her go and die! Why'd you let her go and die
Your mother is sleeping, someone try and wake her! (x2)
Mother come to me. Wake up from your sleep. I am just a little boy. I am just a little boy. (x2)
Why'd you let her go and die! Why'd you let her go and die
Your mother is sleeping, someone try and wake her! (x4)
Poor recording
Great song, bad recording equipment
lol yeah i used a camera to record this... then i convert it to MP3.. but its all good.. thx for the support
pretty good
I like this. You have a really good, natural voice. It sounds good with the acoustic style in my opinion. I agree with Red-Nova about the recording gear, something more direct would give you better results. I think you have a great style of playing and I look forward to hearing more with better quality.
Keep it up!
thx for the comment, yeah i need better stuff but i like the purity of it.. when i play live it sounds like this.. not perfect, ya know
Genius
You obviously have a great sense of rhythm to be able to perform such excellent playing and singing! Not to mention that the song composition itself is pretty impressive. I specially love how powerful the chorus is. You should get better recording gear, because the audio quality doesn't do your awesome playing any justice. I also recommend using a digital audio editor like Audacity. I could help in removing those pops in the audio and in cutting unwanted parts in the track like that sound of you picking up the microphone at the end.
You have a lot talent man, keep up the great work!
Thank you, and as for the helping... I would gladly let you help.. I'm just a song writer lol i have no clue how to do all the technical stuff, at the moment I just do acoustic show down here in Panama city.. So it dont have to be perfect on stage but i would like to clean it up for people not at the show :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
BrandonHicks15 
