Excellent
A great 1st track. A great track regardless of when it was written! This would be great in flash movies/games.
5/5 10/10 just 'cause its awesome.
I can't tell if you were going for strings sounding synth'd or not. It seems your instruments hang halfway in between the two sounds. Its a little unusual sounding but its not negative. It has its own "feel". While your tracks should be diverse and unique (as opposed to making one song and remixing it a bunch), try to keep this feel throughout your songs. It is your signature. Your effort and emotion imprinted upon the notes. With some luck, and further displays of talent like this, you could become quite well known on the NGAP.
Regardless of how many people hear or enjoy this song, this is going on my iPod lol