Kewl :)
its definetly got the trancy feel you were after, and you dont seem to have any major mastering issues and what ever steps youve taken seems to have worked :) I would personally make your main synth more brighter to livin it up a little bit and give it a little bit more character.
Overall you have placed a great first submission for 2011 and look forward to seeing what else you got cooking.
Keep it up mate!