I don't get it.
I mean, I like it and all, it's okay, but in all truth, I'm not feeling anything, and honestly, It doesn't feel like the "This should be in a video game" feeling.
The chorus is nice, but it doesn't really accent any "epic" part of the music.
Look down on me if you will, but I still say there's room for a little improvement.
If you want to use a chorus, have it accent a part. That will make it feel more epic. Try a little more oomph or pizzazz or something like that. Thank you.
(Also, if you tell Zero Bombers NOT to do it, they WILL do it. Trust me, personal experience.)