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Uploaded
Jan 18, 2011 | 9:49 PM EST
File Info
Song
1.4 MB
3 min 4 sec
Score
2.37 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 2.37 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
3,480 Plays | 101 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

Well I want to get my music out there.I don't solely stick to rap, I do play drums and sing for other bands.Hopefully will have more stuff uploaded.If people want the lyrics I will post them.Feedback is appreciated, enjoy!
Alcatraz Most Wanted-A Day In The Life

Reviews


sly384sly384

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Needs some polishing.

I'm no expert but the chorus or feat. rapper (1:00-1:53) was a bit sloppy, slow, and awkward. As for your rapping (Hoping it's you in the start and the finish) The first critique I have is Mood Vs. Delivery, the rap was a story about your life and how depressing it was and what happened but you sound monotone through ought like you really don't care. The last short verse was better than the other too but it was bit sloppy sounding, like syllables were meshing together or you stumbled over them, and also this is more of my personal taste but the cursing makes it feel like you needed to add extra syllables so you threw fuck in for the hell of it. I like it but it does need some polishing.

Grade: D, Good try but it's only the start if you want a masterpiece.


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sundaybaconsundaybacon

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

lol

i heard this instrumental on youtube. stay on beat guys



TriplicideTriplicide

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Meh.

Try to stress your syllables. Sound more like you WANT to be rapping. Slow down a bit at some points too, at points your too fast for your beats. The only good part was when you started getting really fast at 1:58. Just constructive criticism man.


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nekoshintanekoshinta

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Rofl jacobge has a point

you'd have to be drunk to like rofl..



jacobgejacobge

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

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hahaha badger badger mushroom mushroom


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