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Jan 13, 2011 | 4:04 PM EST
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3.8 MB
2 min 4 sec
3.21 / 5.00

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Rated 3.21 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Ambient

Author Comments

Ok this is a work in progress..

please review...tell me what should be added



Rated 3 / 5 stars

A lot of things need changed in this.

That bassline doesn't fit in whatsoever with the vocals, making it hard to listen.
The kick suddenly enters from nowhere with no warning at all, making it confusing.
There are no transitions, and the song doesnt flow at all. This makes it uncomfortable to listen to.

The vocals are very good, but they're failing to reach their full potential. They could be alot better used in something else. (Check out B-Complex - Beautiful Lies and also Mount Eden dubsteb - Sierra Leone. You'll see what i mean about those vocals)

Not an enjoyable piece of music to listen to, but it has potential i suppose.

You asked for a review and i gave you the truth, sorry for being a dick :/

- Dan Roth

People find this review helpful!
Waidmann responds:

I thought so.

I didnt know with what to go...right now its like this...
But im thinking of completely overhauling the beat, but keepong the vocals as they are..

its a demo after all..