A lot of things need changed in this.

That bassline doesn't fit in whatsoever with the vocals, making it hard to listen.
The kick suddenly enters from nowhere with no warning at all, making it confusing.
There are no transitions, and the song doesnt flow at all. This makes it uncomfortable to listen to.

The vocals are very good, but they're failing to reach their full potential. They could be alot better used in something else. (Check out B-Complex - Beautiful Lies and also Mount Eden dubsteb - Sierra Leone. You'll see what i mean about those vocals)

Not an enjoyable piece of music to listen to, but it has potential i suppose.

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- Dan Roth