It's ok :)

(These are merely my opinions. If you disagree with them, then of course you have every right to do so xD )

Just for fun I am going to break this review into statements and questions.

Statement 1:
I have the feeling that there is a bit too much reverb, overall. The background noise it makes I find quite disturbing.

Statement 2:
Even though this song has a good feel it jumps around quite much. At least it sounds great when statement 1 is excluded. :D

Statement 3:
When you begin to cut the song off at 1:44 it sounds strange to revert it slightly at the last second 1:50, It makes the cut-off sound ehmm..... unpleasantly unexpected I guess. The bounce just doesn't cut it (pun intended) with the drums dropped off.
In my opinion it would've been better to ease the melody from earlier to 1:44, into the melody of 1:50 and later by making a more linear cut-off, thus making a slower cut-off towards the same end but affecting the produced sound with the same weight as, say perhaps 1:47.

Question 1:
It sounds to me that you had a minor buffer overload at around 2:00 (hence strangely emphasised barely noticable short noise creaking) and at few other places. At what buffer lenght are you sampling this?

Question 2:
Are you using Gross beat? I've never used it but I've checked it out. If you're not using Fl studio then don't even mind this question :)