well has to be improved

i dont like so much but in mi onest opinion that part of the 1:08 was very good try to extend the music i know its hard but it has to be done try to take the part of 1:08 to extende the music cus was really good i hope listen this music with some corrections well but for 1st music was very good

Did you use FL Studio?

I recognize all of the drum loops from it...

The song wasn't all that great, I agree. It was a good start, though. Just keep trying and use your own stuff instead of the loops that came with FL.

-ParteeDJ

actually very good

Sicckkk!! i like it, its unique and got a distinctive sound, keep it up and make more like thiss!! :D 9/10!

Woah......

THAT WAS AWESOME........
first it got slow and then built up and then from 1:08 i was like WOWOWOWOWOW
awesome!!! Pure awesome...
and for ur first submission its more awesome!
Wish more ppl could see this!!

oowww?

man that first 10 seconds or so gave me a brain aneurysm i think lol, unique though, 4's and 9's for you.
Ps. sick beat with drums