Good

I like the song but (not trying to be mean) it did get a little boring until you got to the piano solo, but after a while it was... meh. But that piano solo was BEAUTIFUL( or awesome whatever you prefer :D)

Ok doke.

Get in touch with me sometime on PM Here or something and i'll help you find some better samples to use for your songs. People are going to call you out for using presets trust me lol. For some reason, even if your just starting people will just HATE on presets left and right. This song isn't a bad start for sure. Its got some good parts to it and it sounds like your learning The paino is pretty nice in this one also. Before you know it you'll have yourself a top five here on NG just keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

Hmm.

I can see where you're going with this but you definitely still have alot to learn.
I can hear that you're still using alot of the basic FL Presets, i suggest you lookup some tutorials on how to make your own sounds and whatnot.
Besides that, you want to work on your buildups / breakdowns, you might want to add some SFX to this aswell (Later on) I like the tempo change at the end,
and your choice of instruments even tho they're pretty basic.
Generally this has a good sound to it and you've got talent, just keep doing what you're doing and practice ALOT. (It's what i did, (i've got about 500 different projects about 350 were for experimenting and were never even posted on here, just so you know ;) )
Well in any case, i hope i helped :)

Peace out~

-Noisebringer