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{B.A.B.} Lynness's Theme ~WIP~

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Date
01/03/2011
File Info
Song
1.8 MB
47 sec
Score
3.23 / 5.00

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Rated 3.23 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal
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Author Comments

First off, I would normally submit this as miscellaneous or classical rock, but I need some advice from Metalheads about the drums and guitars. Is everything in order? I'm not sure, so let me know, especially regarding the bass. I'm trying to make a symphonic metal theme song based off of Kamelot's Ghost Opera for a character called Lynness.

Pic of Lynness:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6 692923/100212lyness.jpg

Ghost Opera by Kamelot:
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=j5KpmFXRI2A

Hey assholes who've been voting zero, how about telling me what's wrong with the damn song instead of voting and running? Any advice will be GREATLY appreciated, this is the first metal song I've ever attempted.

Reviews


Neophyte-RoninNeophyte-Ronin

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Needs Polishing... or a Guitarist

A symphonic metal track usually requires some collaboration with an actual metal musician before it can shine. But I'll offer input:

The drums are a little repetitive.

The rhythm guitar is unmistakably digital. While it's okay as is, I would suggest that you collaborate with one of the regulars in the portal. If you don't need an insanely complex lead solo, I recommend Bad-Man-Incorporated, both for guitar work and for help in mixing the sound (sounds muffled).

Voted 5 and shot you 2.36. Zero Voters are harsh when they don't read your comments. Perhaps a good chunk of the mess with them can be resolved with a campaign to end child illiteracy.


blackattackbitch responds:

Thanks dude, I needed that advice. I'm planning to collaborate with a metal musician after I finish the rest of the track. Regardless, I want to do the best that I can on my own before I finish this track. And I think the muffled sound might be a result of me using a tad bit too many instruments to compose this and not enough EQ work. (I went melody-crazy hahaha)

Man, if I can get a good guitarist and a good drummer on this though, my god, this song could be epic.

Thanks for the advice, this is the exact kind of guidance I was looking for!