Score: 7
"You're right"
date: April 15, 2006
I think you are right in saying that this is not as good as the other waltz; however, it has a lot more potential than the other. If you expanded a little more on the melody, it could have been better. Perhaps you might have used some dissonance to add some tension for a bit, and then let it out with a gradual dip back into consonance. Again, with the distortion. The piece would sound a lot better without it.
Nice work. I wonder, will there be a 3rd movement?
Rocky
Author's Response:
thanks alot.... this is something i really didnt put much thought into, i had a starting idea and took it to town, basically.... i think youre right, i should put more dissonance, and maybe even an alternate melody somewhere....like i said this one was pretty much composed on the go....
Thanks