I turned it up and re-directed some of the sound. Did a little mixing on it. I got complaints about it being too quiet last time. It should be loud enough now. Hopefully no clipping. Let me know what you think. Honest criticism please.
It get's pretty epic about half way, so please listen through the song. And before zero-bombing, I'd appreciate reasoning. I know this won't stop anyone. I would just be very greatful if I could receive honest remarks and critical thinking, rather than a blatant "zero" that says nothing except, "you suck". Lol. I know I suck. I'm just looking for some reviews.
has great potential!
I really like the first half of the song, but then around 2:00 it starts to get a little odd. the start feels like it is going to be this epic song that could almost be used in a movie. i think the last half of the song would benefit from some more low tones and some more extension on some of the notes. it is a good start to something that could be incredible, it just needs more. =]
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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