i hate to give you a low ratin

for such a short bit, it took longer than you want for it to start up. you may want to shorten the beginning down to about 6-8 seconds into the song, not 19-21. by then, my interest sort of died out but i listened to it anyway.

anyway, i like the sort of mellow beat you have going on here, but theres no buildup, climax, and decline, and that's generally what people are looking for.

really good if this is one of your first few songs, i think you can nail this a little better :D

sorry if i came across as a jerkface >___>