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If you were given a chance to choose
between two things.
Each more appealing that the other.
Both screaming out to you.
Both beg to be picked.
Both requiring you to forfeit something.
What what you choose?
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Great song you have here.
I look forwards to seeing you talent in the future.
It's really great how this song can spark great reviews in us all.

Sounds good

This has a somewhat ambient feel but also kind of sounds like Linkin Park as well. I just don't hear any vocals but seeing as you plan to add them very soon then it should sound great to hear and review all over again in the near future as well. The guitar sounds kind of like a DJ grabbed it and kept spinning it back a bit for a cool effect to it.

The keyboard sounds very nice and kind of like it had a voice at certain parts which is nice I guess. The bass tends to be a bit too loud at certain parts as well which I guess isn't a real problem for most people. The drum beat sounds cool and I like them.

Kind of gives me a feel as if I am all alone for some reason or another. Overall, very good song, looking forward to hearing it with vocals in the near future.

Review Request Club

Not bad

Well I think it's great that you wrote this song for your grandmother who passed away, that was very kind of you. I can tell just by the length that you put a good amount of effort into this.

The melodies weren't to my liking too much, they weren't musically incorrect - they just didn't strike me as anything really original or moving. The background pads were a nice touch, but it just didn't really sound like all the instruments blended near as well as I would have liked them to. 4:45 to the end, however, blended perfectly, and was probably my favorite part of the song. The ending was very well done, as well as the intro. Both parts were strong points to me, but I'm not real sure when the main guitar first comes in fit well...maybe a gradual fade in?

The piano, guitar, and pads all seem to be kinda out there doing their own thing and not really blending into a single coherent melody to me. The background melody on the guitar seems a bit low quality, granted it's distorted, I think it could have been recorded better.

The percussion stood out to me most. I liked the bass kicks and double kicks a lot actually. I don't think anything needs to be changed there it sounds great.

The solo guitar was a nice touch, although I don't really think the long blaring notes were all that pleasant to listen to.

Overall it's a decent track. I don't think it's perfect by any means, but it gets the job done. I think it could use a touch up here and there to really complete it.

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This is a work of art

This song should be respected for what the author is expressing from within. This isn't just a bunch of instruments being played as a melody.. This song is a big part of the author's life, and reflects what was a part of his life. R.I.P. To those who 0 bombed this song, you are imbeciles. Probably are jealous that this guy can make a sweet ass song AND love his grandmother with all his heart. A big fuck you to those who 0 bombed this song. This deserves top 30. I don't even like this kind of genre. Yet, this is different. I truely respect this piece. You did a damn good job. 5/5 10/10

MAN! :(

Y.Y i know what you feel, my grandma its in the heaven too, im argentinian sorry for my speaking form or idk.
emm..
ah! GREAT SONG! and GO ON!!! don't let your arms go down, just keep goin on and always have a smile on ur face! \m/