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Uploaded
Dec 16, 2010 | 12:20 PM EST
File Info
Song
8 MB
5 min 0 sec
Score
3.64 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.64 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
421 Plays | 31 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - General Rock
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Author Comments

This is a demo I made with my girlfriend. As it's still in the demo stage, I would really appreciate some feedback/advice.

Here are the lyrics:

He sits and he stares at the sun whilst it's rising
Makes shadows of anything left in its way
The light is deceptive it's cold and it's wet ALL DAY

Sleepless time goes by at half the speed
Eyes closed for hours and no way to sleep
The darkness is worse cause the memories of everything
Breathe.

It's not depression; he's far too privileged for that.
No real problems. Just shit that he wants to forget
The quotes on his walls remind him of the wars. There was a point to them long ago.

The meaning has gone and it won't return.
The Bertrand Russell and the Buddhist proverbs
They speak the truth but that's not enough.
You need more. You need more. You need love.

He sits and he thinks that the world could be flat.
A god could exist; we're all brains in a vat
The only thing fact is that no-one knows anything

His mind races quicker than the speed of light
There are too many thoughts with no time to write
Too many feelings and no will to fight for them

Reviews


NusaikNusaik

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome

Beautiful song! I somehow get the feeling that it's about me.


Nitr0gen responds:

That's because it is about you... </spooky>


gingerspinegingerspine

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good!

I really liked the lyrics. I'm not sure if they totally fit with the music, but its a good combination! :)
Thanks for sharing!


Nitr0gen responds:

Thanks man :)


ZadamanimZadamanim

Rated 5 / 5 stars

interesting, i like :D

Its good, I like the unique use of, are they 128th notes(?)
The only thing I noticed was that the vocals were a loud, tho it could be that my computer speakers have no bass.. alas, limitations
anyway, If you are familiar with flutes, then you know if you do not blow correctly, you produce a "breathy" tone, which is kinda what sounds like is in the background when she sings.
I would have lowered the tone (not the pitch tho) of the voice just a little, to be smooth with the rest of the song, or she could sing louder, then lower the volume of the track, either way it would fix the tone problem.
btw, the intro was sick ;D, u could u that instrument as a kick between verses or give it a synth solo, just an idea


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Nitr0gen responds:

cheers for the review man :) Yeah the vocals are actually taken from when she sang the track and it was acoustic, hence the problem. When we get a chance, we'll re-record them. I found the mix really hard, because when I play it on my laptop, the vocals do sound too high but when I listen with my headphones or speakers, they're not.

Useful review though :) Thanks alot.