rhythm..

seemed off at first but then it caught up after a couple seconds. Nice track, stay up.

fresh

u recked that

Hmm, nice!

I don't like rap, neither hip hop.. My favorite style is Rock and Heavy Metal, but, the little I know about hip hop is that this song is one of the bests I've ever heard, it's totally better than the others I'm forced to hear in the radio sometimes, like SCTE3 said. It's really a good song.

The back beat was very cool, your voice was nice too, it has the rap sound, it really fits with the back beat, the lyrics are good, they kept beat rhythm, your voice wasn't slow neither fast, I could understand the lyrics, it's a thing I can't do in those famous hip hop.

As I said before, it's not a bad song, it's better than a lot of other rap, that's why I'm giving you a 9, I think it's a cool song, but I also think there's room to improve. Keep it up, man!

-Member of the Review Request Club-

RogerBK

Decent

Well the beat certainly is interesting. It's not your usual hip-hop beat at all. Sounds like an ambient track from a flash game or something, but with some added sub bass. I think it was pretty good though. In my opinion, it worked, and it's pretty damn original.

I honestly can't hear where people think you're messing up in your rap. I'm sure you flowed like that because you wanted it to sound a certain way, and I think it sounded pretty good honestly. It sounded fast paced and the breathing wasn't annoying because it was really fast.

The lyrics were good, and some parts were funny. Not sure what more I could ask for there.

The only real criticism I could give you is that I think later in the song you should have introduced a hard snare or clap somewhere so that the beat actually came together you know? Maybe about halfway into the song, a clap would have 'stabilized' the beat if you know what I mean. I think that would take care of some of the complaints of the beat sounding all over the place.

Oh, and I remembered what it is now, the beat sounds like something from Marble Quest on Xbox Live. If you've played it you'll know what I'm talking about.

Keep up the good work.

-RRC-

Pretty good I guess

This actually sounds like most hip hop songs I am forced to hear o the radio when riding in the car with my father, I should download this and put it onto a cd and see if my dad likes it at all because he probably will. The lyrics are pretty good actually which is great to know. The way it just seems to flow as a beat is really good as well even though I do not enjoy the hip hop genre in the least even though there is a good song that comes from it every once in a great while like this little gem which doesn't sound as horrible.

The drum 'n' bass sounds excellent as well which is pretty cool. Who was doing the deep voice by the way and why do so many hip hop songs have those kind of intros or vocals added to them anyways? Oh well, I guess that is beside the point. This song is great and the such but to be honest I can not think of a way to improve it in the least so good job on this I guess.

The tune is great though and the lyrics were a bit confusing to me to be honest. Would be nice if you added the lyrics as well to the author comments so I can try to understand what you are singing about. You could have a future in the hip hop industry though if you can find someone to sign onto which is good for you since the hip hop region of music is constantly picking up new people it seems.

Good luck on any mixtapes you make in the future.

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